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please review my art - 5/13/2008 5:13:09 PM
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peter222999
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your feedback would be cool
bibletshirts
I want to introduce some of these to local shops but my confidence is
lacking and feedback would be appreciated
thanks
peter222999
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RE: please review my art - 5/13/2008 8:06:13 PM
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Memaw.
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Peter,
Those are awesome!
You shouldn't have any doubt about your artistic ability.
Go for it!!
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RE: please review my art - 5/14/2008 2:14:21 AM
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MrFribbles
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Peter, those are definitely well done! I have to admit, they aren't my cup of tea, but I think that for what you are trying for (and I think a lot of people are into your kind of look), you have done a wonderful, wonderful job!
I would agree with Memaw, go for it!
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RE: please review my art - 5/14/2008 10:57:08 AM
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peter222999
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Thank you all for taking the time to view and reply, I deeply appreciate it
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RE: please review my art - 5/15/2008 1:29:58 AM
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sunshine4God
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Wow,These are awesome!
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RE: please review my art - 5/21/2008 10:49:06 AM
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techne
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1. some of these images (maybe even most of them) are copyrighted - do you have permission to use them?
2. how are these different than similar items already out there? i mean, it feels like i've seen the images, scripture choices and even the font before. a lot. they do feel very clip-arty. i don't necessarily have a problem with using pre-fab imagery and visual elements, but i think you do need to do something interesting and new with them. and some of these items have such disparate elements (in terms of style) that it's very obvious what the sources are, and this fights against engaging with the images and therefore, the content.
3. spell-check (and check punctuation while you're at it) - you wouldn't want to sell your t-shirts with spelling and grammar errors on them, would you?
< Message edited by techne -- 5/22/2008 10:40:30 AM >
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